Monday, 2 April 2012

Jay's Fanfiction Draft


This is the ending story of "the Notebook".
It was sad and made me think about the true meaning of the word "Love"

I have changed some story myself like what I wanted when I watched the movie.


Chapter 1

It is already in one month, Ally has been in the hospital....

Ally's memories of two people who are Noah and Ally were getting cleared.


She was trying to keep unnoticed to Noah, but eventually she was getting angry with cannot help herself.
Will never forget... Even though I forgot everything else... I loved, love, and will love the name of the man Noah. She promised herself that will never forget as long as she can, no until she dies. And she just wrote his name on the palm with very small letters to remember.  
'love Noah......'

Noah came to her room.
he just met Ally's doctor, his face like he just wipe their tears, and made forced laughter for refused to admit to Ally.

Unexpected doctor's calls, and consultations over a period of 30 minutes...... Ally wondered about two people divided, but easy to bear when she saw Noah's face. And thinking and imagine...... It was just how bad the story......


Chapter 2

Unfailingly, Noah was reading a book for Ally......
Even he read the same book 12 times, he was always pretending like first time during the last 11 times and including today.
Approaching the end of the book slip, Noah thought.

'After I read the next chapter, as always, Ally tears of sadness to the hero will be displayed. '

Of course, Noah held a small white handkerchief in his hand for Ally.
In the end, like Noah's expected when the book was covered, Ally had the white handkerchief to wipe the tears, and as always Noah was holding Ally's hand.

Then they heard a knock on the door, and Ally's doctor has called Noah.
Noah was embarrassed by the sudden call but he was harboring little bit a expectations and was going to see the doctor.

Just in front of door of doctor's room, he exhaled a big breath before he knocked the door.

"Excuse me......"
"Come on in."

Ally's doctor, Mike recommended to sit on the chair with not even luminous or dark face.

"Please have a cup of tea and please listen to my words"

Noah was a strange anxiety, holding the coffee cup in his hand, at that moment, he heard the story which he would not want to hear.

"When you hear this story was going to be hard I know, but I thought you have to know as soon as possible so I have requested to please call a sudden. I do not mean to hurt your feelings, and focus on the story please. "
"1 hour ago, Ally's final test results of her brain and all states came out. Now what we can expect, she may live three days......."

Mike stopped talking and looked Noah for a moment....... And He could find Noah was extremely getting to tears.

"Three days?"
"she just lives three days?"
"Was it all you can talk to us?"

Noah's tears were getting redder, and eventually the tears ran down.

"Yes, I'm really sorry."
"Now she was given three days......"

Noah put down the coffee cup slowly and just left the room without saying a word.

Noah walked blankly and he has reached in front of Ally's hospital room. He looked into a small window on the door, Ally was writing something with serious face.

He didn't know what to say, how to say and when.... for Ally....
Hundreds, thousands of thoughts flashed passed away in his head but he could not find the right way. So he just wiped the tears to go into the room, at the moment he made the brightest face forward to Ally.

Ally didn't ask anything like she already determined, and talked about the book as usual.


Chapter 3  

Seems like she had worry, Alley did not eat properly in the evening and she was tossing and turning before she fell asleep.
Noah looked Ally who fell asleep, he suddenly found a small wrinkled letter in her hand.
'love Noah......'

Noah started shedding tears again, and he just left the room carefully.
After crying for a long time, he started thinking about in the time given to them for three days......
And he thought again like the three days will be 72 hours which is he can be with Ally, and also the moment that more than 4300 minutes.


Chapter 4

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