Wednesday, 4 April 2012

Jay's Fanfiction final - 'the Notebook'


This is the ending story of "the Notebook".
It was sad and made me think about the true meaning of the word "Love"

I have changed some story myself like what I wanted when I watched the movie.


Chapter 1

It is already in one month, Ally has been in the hospital....

Ally's memories of two people who are Noah and Ally were getting cleared.


She was trying to keep unnoticed to Noah, but eventually she was getting angry with cannot help herself.
Will never forget... Even though I forgot everything else... I loved, love, and will love the name of the man Noah. She promised herself that will never forget as long as she can, no until she dies. And she just wrote his name on the palm with very small letters to remember. 
'love Noah......'

Noah came to her room.
he just met Ally's doctor, his face like he just wipe their tears, and made forced laughter for refused to admit to Ally.

Unexpected doctor's calls, and consultations over a period of 30 minutes...... Ally wondered about two people divided, but easy to bear when she saw Noah's face. And thinking and imagine...... It was just how bad the story......


Chapter 2

Unfailingly, Noah was reading a book for Ally......
Even he read the same book 12 times, he was always pretending like first time during the last 11 times and including today.
Approaching the end of the book slip, Noah thought.

'After I read the next chapter, as always, Ally tears of sadness to the hero will be displayed. '

Of course, Noah held a small white handkerchief in his hand for Ally.
In the end, like Noah's expected when the book was covered, Ally had the white handkerchief to wipe the tears, and as always Noah was holding Ally's hand.

Then they heard a knock on the door, and Ally's doctor has called Noah.
Noah was embarrassed by the sudden call but he was harboring little bit a expectations and was going to see the doctor.

Just in front of door of doctor's room, he exhaled a big breath before he knocked the door.

"Excuse me......"
"Come on in."

Ally's doctor, Mike recommended to sit on the chair with not even luminous or dark face.

"Please have a cup of tea and please listen to my words"

Noah was a strange anxiety, holding the coffee cup in his hand, at that moment, he heard the story which he would not want to hear.

"When you hear this story was going to be hard I know, but I thought you have to know as soon as possible so I have requested to please call a sudden. I do not mean to hurt your feelings, and focus on the story please. "
"1 hour ago, Ally's final test results of her brain and all states came out. Now what we can expect, she may live three days......."

Mike stopped talking and looked Noah for a moment....... And He could find Noah was extremely getting to tears.

"Three days?"
"she just lives three days?"
"Was it all you can talk to us?"

Noah's tears were getting redder, and eventually the tears ran down.

"Yes, I'm really sorry."
"Now she was given three days......"

Noah put down the coffee cup slowly and just left the room without saying a word.

Noah walked blankly and he has reached in front of Ally's hospital room. He looked into a small window on the door, Ally was writing something with serious face.

He didn't know what to say, how to say and when.... for Ally....
Hundreds, thousands of thoughts flashed passed away in his head but he could not find the right way. So he just wiped the tears to go into the room, at the moment he made the brightest face forward to Ally.

Ally didn't ask anything like she already determined, and talked about the book as usual.


Chapter 3 

Seems like she had worry, Alley did not eat properly in the evening and she was tossing and turning before she fell asleep.
Noah looked Ally who fell asleep, he suddenly found a small wrinkled letter in her hand.
'love Noah......'

Noah started shedding tears again, and he just left the room carefully.
After crying for a long time, he started thinking about in the time given to them for three days......
And he thought again like the three days will be 72 hours which is he can be with Ally, and also the moment that more than 4300 minutes.


Chapter 4

The first day of three days time given to Noah and Ally.

In the morning, Noah has prepared the book as always, and ready to walk.

"Ally, shall we read the book at outside today? the sun shine is so lovely."
"Outside? yes Noah, I've been a heavy feeling in my ward."

Ally was ready to walk slowly, finally she smiled to Noah when she took the favorite pink umbrella.
They was walking around the hospital with some lovely chat and sat down on the bench in front of the hospital.
They spent some time with reading the book as usual and talked about each other. On that time Ally was trying to catch the forgotten her memories again.

"Noah, a warm day, just little bit a time spent with you,  I'm feeling really much better."

Noah smiled and looked at Ally, then he seems like just made a big decision.

"Ally, yesterday... I met Mike."
"You became health enough so you can return home tomorrow."
"Is it true?"
"Why do you say it now I have good news to you?"

She has surprised by the news, and she looked Noah again that like she want to check it to him.
Ally has asked, Noah has just nodded with smile laughter.

Ally returned to the room earlier than he thought. She was packing her bag with bright face, she seemed to go home already.
On that time, Noah saw that and he went to mike after did determining something again.

"Mike, I will bring Ally home tomorrow. you can't stop me anymore."
"I don't want to spend rest of our time in this hospital, and she might not want it as well."

Mike was surprised with the sudden notice from Noah and tried to make him stop but he has already gone out, the closed door has remained.

Coming back to room, Ally was already talking with nurses about she is going to discharge tomorrow and Noah was crying again.


Chapter 5

The next morning, Noah and Ally was very busy to leave the hospital. Ally was smiling at all time but Noah was driving to home with heavy heart. When they closed to home, just in advance to the idea of Noah, he talked to Ally.

" Ally, we are getting close to the home, the red brick house......"

Ally felt impressed again, even though she is on the way to home but she can't remember the house, where it was, which was like, what shape of furniture and so on......
Finally they got arrived, they began the house tour.

" I'm sorry Ally. I was at the hospital so I have not properly cleaning the house."
"Oops! I forgot to change the water in your favorite vase...."
"Gosh... That's my favorite gook! That shows there's why....."

Noah showed all the house the most natural attitude, and Ally felt thanks to Noah that she can't remember but could understand this place was their home.
Noah determined the comfortable face of Ally and let her laid on the bed.

"During you have take a rest, I will do clean the home and have dinner ready."
"It will not delicious as usual but it will be the best almost impossible today."

Noah has cleaned living room and he made the dinner.
Fortunately, he has made urgently call for ingredients last night and picked up on the way home. He could not get all what he wants but he could make some carrot cake which is Ally's favorite.

Dark lighting, illuminated tables above, and a bottle of wine...... which is not expensive but they always enjoyed.
Noah has finished the last dinner with his love.......

"Wow Noah, it's... it's perfect!"
"I would have never thought you'd be ready like this, Thanks."

Ally moved due to the small tears, and Noah was really happy with Ally's response.

There were only two people and not too long even not too short dinner time......
It was one of the most perfect time the moments ever had together.

"Ally, this is your favorite carrot cake."
"I am not sure the taste but please have it with relish."

Although she can't remember, she felt gratitude again to Noah for preparing dinner and her favorite food.
Slip after so perfect dinner for two people, they were on the bed.
As tired to fell asleep, suddenly Noah said nervously.

"Ally, I promise, no matter what the world, I will close my eyes at the same time with you."
"Now that, this world is without you, I don't have any value..."
"I love you."

Ally listened to the words.... She closed her eyes and went to sleep quietly, Noah was holding her arms making closer to him and fell asleep.


Chapter 6

If there is a God who hear the prayer of Noah does?
They left without coming to the third day, sickness with Ally and at the same time Noah met the sudden mysterious death.

A few days later, Mike visited their home and he could find Noah and Ally with really happy face and it seems like Noah was holding her and saying that I love you so much......


-The End-


I was in a hurry so could not express all the details which I wanted to show you so if I have chance later, I will remake this with perfect expression. 

Thanks for reading my fanfic. 

Monday, 2 April 2012

Jay's Fanfiction Draft


This is the ending story of "the Notebook".
It was sad and made me think about the true meaning of the word "Love"

I have changed some story myself like what I wanted when I watched the movie.


Chapter 1

It is already in one month, Ally has been in the hospital....

Ally's memories of two people who are Noah and Ally were getting cleared.


She was trying to keep unnoticed to Noah, but eventually she was getting angry with cannot help herself.
Will never forget... Even though I forgot everything else... I loved, love, and will love the name of the man Noah. She promised herself that will never forget as long as she can, no until she dies. And she just wrote his name on the palm with very small letters to remember.  
'love Noah......'

Noah came to her room.
he just met Ally's doctor, his face like he just wipe their tears, and made forced laughter for refused to admit to Ally.

Unexpected doctor's calls, and consultations over a period of 30 minutes...... Ally wondered about two people divided, but easy to bear when she saw Noah's face. And thinking and imagine...... It was just how bad the story......


Chapter 2

Unfailingly, Noah was reading a book for Ally......
Even he read the same book 12 times, he was always pretending like first time during the last 11 times and including today.
Approaching the end of the book slip, Noah thought.

'After I read the next chapter, as always, Ally tears of sadness to the hero will be displayed. '

Of course, Noah held a small white handkerchief in his hand for Ally.
In the end, like Noah's expected when the book was covered, Ally had the white handkerchief to wipe the tears, and as always Noah was holding Ally's hand.

Then they heard a knock on the door, and Ally's doctor has called Noah.
Noah was embarrassed by the sudden call but he was harboring little bit a expectations and was going to see the doctor.

Just in front of door of doctor's room, he exhaled a big breath before he knocked the door.

"Excuse me......"
"Come on in."

Ally's doctor, Mike recommended to sit on the chair with not even luminous or dark face.

"Please have a cup of tea and please listen to my words"

Noah was a strange anxiety, holding the coffee cup in his hand, at that moment, he heard the story which he would not want to hear.

"When you hear this story was going to be hard I know, but I thought you have to know as soon as possible so I have requested to please call a sudden. I do not mean to hurt your feelings, and focus on the story please. "
"1 hour ago, Ally's final test results of her brain and all states came out. Now what we can expect, she may live three days......."

Mike stopped talking and looked Noah for a moment....... And He could find Noah was extremely getting to tears.

"Three days?"
"she just lives three days?"
"Was it all you can talk to us?"

Noah's tears were getting redder, and eventually the tears ran down.

"Yes, I'm really sorry."
"Now she was given three days......"

Noah put down the coffee cup slowly and just left the room without saying a word.

Noah walked blankly and he has reached in front of Ally's hospital room. He looked into a small window on the door, Ally was writing something with serious face.

He didn't know what to say, how to say and when.... for Ally....
Hundreds, thousands of thoughts flashed passed away in his head but he could not find the right way. So he just wiped the tears to go into the room, at the moment he made the brightest face forward to Ally.

Ally didn't ask anything like she already determined, and talked about the book as usual.


Chapter 3  

Seems like she had worry, Alley did not eat properly in the evening and she was tossing and turning before she fell asleep.
Noah looked Ally who fell asleep, he suddenly found a small wrinkled letter in her hand.
'love Noah......'

Noah started shedding tears again, and he just left the room carefully.
After crying for a long time, he started thinking about in the time given to them for three days......
And he thought again like the three days will be 72 hours which is he can be with Ally, and also the moment that more than 4300 minutes.


Chapter 4