Jay's Fanfiction final - 'the Notebook'

This is the ending story of "the Notebook".

It was sad and made me think about the true meaning of the word "Love"

I have changed some story myself like what I wanted when I watched the movie.

Chapter 1

It is already in one month, Ally has been in the hospital....

Ally's memories of two people who are Noah and Ally were getting cleared.

She was trying to keep unnoticed to Noah, but eventually she was getting angry with cannot help herself.
Will never forget... Even though I forgot everything else... I loved, love, and will love the name of the man Noah. She promised herself that will never forget as long as she can, no until she dies. And she just wrote his name on the palm with very small letters to remember. 

'love Noah......'

Noah came to her room.

he just met Ally's doctor, his face like he just wipe their tears, and made forced laughter for refused to admit to Ally.

Unexpected doctor's calls, and consultations over a period of 30 minutes...... Ally wondered about two people divided, but easy to bear when she saw Noah's face. And thinking and imagine...... It was just how bad the story......

Chapter 2

Unfailingly, Noah was reading a book for Ally......

Even he read the same book 12 times, he was always pretending like first time during the last 11 times and including today.
Approaching the end of the book slip, Noah thought.

'After I read the next chapter, as always, Ally tears of sadness to the hero will be displayed. '

Of course, Noah held a small white handkerchief in his hand for Ally.

In the end, like Noah's expected when the book was covered, Ally had the white handkerchief to wipe the tears, and as always Noah was holding Ally's hand.

Then they heard a knock on the door, and Ally's doctor has called Noah.

Noah was embarrassed by the sudden call but he was harboring little bit a expectations and was going to see the doctor.

Just in front of door of doctor's room, he exhaled a big breath before he knocked the door.

"Excuse me......"

"Come on in."

Ally's doctor, Mike recommended to sit on the chair with not even luminous or dark face.

"Please have a cup of tea and please listen to my words"

Noah was a strange anxiety, holding the coffee cup in his hand, at that moment, he heard the story which he would not want to hear.

"When you hear this story was going to be hard I know, but I thought you have to know as soon as possible so I have requested to please call a sudden. I do not mean to hurt your feelings, and focus on the story please. "

"1 hour ago, Ally's final test results of her brain and all states came out. Now what we can expect, she may live three days......."

Mike stopped talking and looked Noah for a moment....... And He could find Noah was extremely getting to tears.

"Three days?"

"she just lives three days?"

"Was it all you can talk to us?"

Noah's tears were getting redder, and eventually the tears ran down.

"Yes, I'm really sorry."

"Now she was given three days......"

Noah put down the coffee cup slowly and just left the room without saying a word.

Noah walked blankly and he has reached in front of Ally's hospital room. He looked into a small window on the door, Ally was writing something with serious face.

He didn't know what to say, how to say and when.... for Ally....

Hundreds, thousands of thoughts flashed passed away in his head but he could not find the right way. So he just wiped the tears to go into the room, at the moment he made the brightest face forward to Ally.

Ally didn't ask anything like she already determined, and talked about the book as usual.

Chapter 3 

Seems like she had worry, Alley did not eat properly in the evening and she was tossing and turning before she fell asleep.

Noah looked Ally who fell asleep, he suddenly found a small wrinkled letter in her hand.

'love Noah......'

Noah started shedding tears again, and he just left the room carefully.

After crying for a long time, he started thinking about in the time given to them for three days......

And he thought again like the three days will be 72 hours which is he can be with Ally, and also the moment that more than 4300 minutes.

Chapter 4

The first day of three days time given to Noah and Ally.

In the morning, Noah has prepared the book as always, and ready to walk.

"Ally, shall we read the book at outside today? the sun shine is so lovely."

"Outside? yes Noah, I've been a heavy feeling in my ward."

Ally was ready to walk slowly, finally she smiled to Noah when she took the favorite pink umbrella.

They was walking around the hospital with some lovely chat and sat down on the bench in front of the hospital.

They spent some time with reading the book as usual and talked about each other. On that time Ally was trying to catch the forgotten her memories again.

"Noah, a warm day, just little bit a time spent with you,  I'm feeling really much better."

Noah smiled and looked at Ally, then he seems like just made a big decision.

"Ally, yesterday... I met Mike."

"You became health enough so you can return home tomorrow."

"Is it true?"

"Why do you say it now I have good news to you?"

She has surprised by the news, and she looked Noah again that like she want to check it to him.

Ally has asked, Noah has just nodded with smile laughter.

Ally returned to the room earlier than he thought. She was packing her bag with bright face, she seemed to go home already.

On that time, Noah saw that and he went to mike after did determining something again.

"Mike, I will bring Ally home tomorrow. you can't stop me anymore."

"I don't want to spend rest of our time in this hospital, and she might not want it as well."

Mike was surprised with the sudden notice from Noah and tried to make him stop but he has already gone out, the closed door has remained.

Coming back to room, Ally was already talking with nurses about she is going to discharge tomorrow and Noah was crying again.

Chapter 5

The next morning, Noah and Ally was very busy to leave the hospital. Ally was smiling at all time but Noah was driving to home with heavy heart. When they closed to home, just in advance to the idea of Noah, he talked to Ally.

" Ally, we are getting close to the home, the red brick house......"

Ally felt impressed again, even though she is on the way to home but she can't remember the house, where it was, which was like, what shape of furniture and so on......

Finally they got arrived, they began the house tour.

" I'm sorry Ally. I was at the hospital so I have not properly cleaning the house."

"Oops! I forgot to change the water in your favorite vase...."

"Gosh... That's my favorite gook! That shows there's why....."

Noah showed all the house the most natural attitude, and Ally felt thanks to Noah that she can't remember but could understand this place was their home.

Noah determined the comfortable face of Ally and let her laid on the bed.

"During you have take a rest, I will do clean the home and have dinner ready."

"It will not delicious as usual but it will be the best almost impossible today."

Noah has cleaned living room and he made the dinner.

Fortunately, he has made urgently call for ingredients last night and picked up on the way home. He could not get all what he wants but he could make some carrot cake which is Ally's favorite.

Dark lighting, illuminated tables above, and a bottle of wine...... which is not expensive but they always enjoyed.

Noah has finished the last dinner with his love.......

"Wow Noah, it's... it's perfect!"

"I would have never thought you'd be ready like this, Thanks."

Ally moved due to the small tears, and Noah was really happy with Ally's response.

There were only two people and not too long even not too short dinner time......

It was one of the most perfect time the moments ever had together.

"Ally, this is your favorite carrot cake."

"I am not sure the taste but please have it with relish."

Although she can't remember, she felt gratitude again to Noah for preparing dinner and her favorite food.

Slip after so perfect dinner for two people, they were on the bed.

As tired to fell asleep, suddenly Noah said nervously.

"Ally, I promise, no matter what the world, I will close my eyes at the same time with you."

"Now that, this world is without you, I don't have any value..."

"I love you."

Ally listened to the words.... She closed her eyes and went to sleep quietly, Noah was holding her arms making closer to him and fell asleep.

Chapter 6

If there is a God who hear the prayer of Noah does?

They left without coming to the third day, sickness with Ally and at the same time Noah met the sudden mysterious death.

A few days later, Mike visited their home and he could find Noah and Ally with really happy face and it seems like Noah was holding her and saying that I love you so much......

-The End-

I was in a hurry so could not express all the details which I wanted to show you so if I have chance later, I will remake this with perfect expression. 

Thanks for reading my fanfic. 

Jay's Fanfiction Draft

This is the ending story of "the Notebook".

It was sad and made me think about the true meaning of the word "Love"

I have changed some story myself like what I wanted when I watched the movie.

Chapter 1

It is already in one month, Ally has been in the hospital....

Ally's memories of two people who are Noah and Ally were getting cleared.

She was trying to keep unnoticed to Noah, but eventually she was getting angry with cannot help herself.
Will never forget... Even though I forgot everything else... I loved, love, and will love the name of the man Noah. She promised herself that will never forget as long as she can, no until she dies. And she just wrote his name on the palm with very small letters to remember.  

'love Noah......'

Noah came to her room.

he just met Ally's doctor, his face like he just wipe their tears, and made forced laughter for refused to admit to Ally.

Unexpected doctor's calls, and consultations over a period of 30 minutes...... Ally wondered about two people divided, but easy to bear when she saw Noah's face. And thinking and imagine...... It was just how bad the story......

Chapter 2

Unfailingly, Noah was reading a book for Ally......

Even he read the same book 12 times, he was always pretending like first time during the last 11 times and including today.
Approaching the end of the book slip, Noah thought.

'After I read the next chapter, as always, Ally tears of sadness to the hero will be displayed. '

Of course, Noah held a small white handkerchief in his hand for Ally.

In the end, like Noah's expected when the book was covered, Ally had the white handkerchief to wipe the tears, and as always Noah was holding Ally's hand.

Then they heard a knock on the door, and Ally's doctor has called Noah.

Noah was embarrassed by the sudden call but he was harboring little bit a expectations and was going to see the doctor.

Just in front of door of doctor's room, he exhaled a big breath before he knocked the door.

"Excuse me......"

"Come on in."

Ally's doctor, Mike recommended to sit on the chair with not even luminous or dark face.

"Please have a cup of tea and please listen to my words"

Noah was a strange anxiety, holding the coffee cup in his hand, at that moment, he heard the story which he would not want to hear.

"When you hear this story was going to be hard I know, but I thought you have to know as soon as possible so I have requested to please call a sudden. I do not mean to hurt your feelings, and focus on the story please. "

"1 hour ago, Ally's final test results of her brain and all states came out. Now what we can expect, she may live three days......."

Mike stopped talking and looked Noah for a moment....... And He could find Noah was extremely getting to tears.

"Three days?"

"she just lives three days?"

"Was it all you can talk to us?"

Noah's tears were getting redder, and eventually the tears ran down.

"Yes, I'm really sorry."

"Now she was given three days......"

Noah put down the coffee cup slowly and just left the room without saying a word.

Noah walked blankly and he has reached in front of Ally's hospital room. He looked into a small window on the door, Ally was writing something with serious face.

He didn't know what to say, how to say and when.... for Ally....

Hundreds, thousands of thoughts flashed passed away in his head but he could not find the right way. So he just wiped the tears to go into the room, at the moment he made the brightest face forward to Ally.

Ally didn't ask anything like she already determined, and talked about the book as usual.

Chapter 3  

Seems like she had worry, Alley did not eat properly in the evening and she was tossing and turning before she fell asleep.

Noah looked Ally who fell asleep, he suddenly found a small wrinkled letter in her hand.

'love Noah......'

Noah started shedding tears again, and he just left the room carefully.

After crying for a long time, he started thinking about in the time given to them for three days......

And he thought again like the three days will be 72 hours which is he can be with Ally, and also the moment that more than 4300 minutes.

Chapter 4

Josh's Final Fanfiction. The Walking Dead.

'Ello ello, group three. This Fan fiction follows "The Walking Dead" The T.V Show.

After a virus has spread through the world everyones worst fear is confirmed - An Undead Apocalypse.. This Fan Fic is a little violent, excuse the gore! 

Please let me know your thoughts and i'm open to any advice on what I could do to spice up this piece ^_^

Plot: A less-than peaceful farm owned by Hershel Greene, has been raided and destroyed by a horde of the undead. The reanimated corpses of past friends and family are known as "walkers", mindless creatures, once human before their infection they are now something completely different. Their skin is constantly rotting away, their bodies move sluggishly, they do not feel pain and they crave only one thing. 

Flesh.

So! After an epic battle with over 500 walkers, one of our main characters Andrea has been split up from the group after being tripped up by a walker leaving everyone to think she was a goner. But Andrea is not a civil rights lawyer anymore, that was her old life. She had been trained by Rick Grimes best/worst friend Shane Walsh. 

She knows how to use a gun, and she doesn't take kindly to these walking rotting corpses especially after they took her sister away from her. 

The Walking Dead, Michonne the Samurai.

Exhausted and weary, losing count of how many there are, Andrea continues to stumble into the darkness of the forest. The croaks and the growls can be heard as the walkers drag at her feet. They stumble and limp after her eager to feed.

She pauses behind a tree to catch her breath, she double checks her pistol, it's out of ammo. "Oh Christ" she exhales, she double checks her duffle bag, apart from a rifle it's empty also. Andrea remains calm the sound of leaves crunching are approaching her.

Crunch Crunch Crunch..

A walker appears out from behind the tree, WHACK! She clubs it with the handle of her pistol. WHACK! WHACK! WHACK! She beats the walker until it can't move. That drew the breath out of her, she's running on her last battery, she can't go any further.

Another walker draws close, Are they ever going to stop coming? Andrea pulls out her knife from her pocket, and makes a well placed stab to its forehead. That's the only way to put these walkers down, a well placed bullet to the brain or blunt trauma to the head is the only way to keep this flesh hungry ghouls at bay.

Andrea stumbles, she falls to the ground a walker collapses onto her it's digging for her throat, at this moment Andrea is terrified, any bite, scratch or contact with walker blood she knows that within 24 hours she herself will become one these things that she herself despises. She screams and tries to aim for its head, but she's in panic and too weak to fend this one off her time is almost near.

SHINK!

The walker's head is sliced off and rolled away into the autumn leaves, the walker collapses and rolls over to one side, a hooded figure stands above her, her slim like physique suggests that she's a female but this isn't the figure that's shocking Andrea, she's shocked because behind her cloaked, mysterious saviour are two walkers bound in chains, with mouths wired shut and arms missing. Andrea takes in deep breaths trying to come back from her panic attack, her saviour flicks her sword removing the blood from the tip, she reaches down and pulls Andrea to her feet. Andrea starts to say the words "Than-" suddenly two fingers are presses sharply against her lips, "shhhh."

She removes the jacket from the walker that almost brought Andreas life to an end, and drapes it over her, Andrea accepts it with weariness and confusion. Next the samurai passes a chain connecting to one of the "neutered" walkers to her and points off into the distance, again she repeats the motion and press two fingers to her lips to signal 'no sound.' They march forward through the forest.

They walk quietly, the only sound coming from the rattling chains of the stranger's companions. Under the stranger's cloak is the scarred face of a once beautiful African-American woman. In her previous life, before the walker infection, she was a prominent family attorney with a thriving legal practice. Nowadays, instead of carrying her leather monogrammed briefcase, she carries a long thin bladed Japanese-made sword, a katana.

Walkers still search the forest aimlessly, hunting for any sign of warm flesh. As Andrea, her hooded guardian and undead slaves walk, a stray walker notices them. Part of the walker's kneecap protrudes from it's leg, giving it an uneven walk as it hungrily moves towards the ragtag group. A flash of metal reflects a stray beam of light through the trees as the katana flies towards the walker, hitting it just left-of-centre of it's forehead. The walker instantly stops moving, and falls to the ground.

The woman walks towards the corpse, to retrieve her weapon. Andrea takes the brief stop to ask the stranger her name. She replies simply, "Michonne". Michonne tugs on the chains of her walker companions, motioning them to move forward. With no other useful appendages other than legs, the walkers have little choice but to follow her. As they trek onward, more beams of light shine upon them from the trees - the exit to the forest is nearby.

After a few moments, the unlikely group is bathed in light. They have reached an open clearing, and the morning sun lingers over top of them. "Who are these walkers you've got chained up," asks Andrea, breaking the silence, "and why are you bringing them with you?". Michonne turns to look at her, and pulls off her hood. She waits, contemplating, and then replies, "I didn't think it would be fair to leave them behind." Andrea looks at Michonne, not yet understanding what she means. Michonne then finishes, "after all, they're my father and husband."

Chloe's Final Fan Fiction

<THE SAME PERSON>

In 1888, from 31^st August to 8^th November, there was a person who threw the London citizens in a state of terror. His name was Jack the Ripper. He had already committed two disgusted murder. Swanson inspector assumed that the Jack the Ripper was a knowledgeable person in dissection. Jack the Ripper murdered five prostitutes and he dissected all the bodies. The prosecution weren’t able to arrest him and the Jack the Ripper suddenly disappeared after the fifth murder.

It was very dark inside even though it was early afternoon. Holmes had a newspaper in his hand and was reading the same article over and over again. The second corpse was found and a letter was send to the press. The second victim was Annie Chapman. She was also a prostitute. Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. Holmes didn’t answer but the door opened. It was Watson. The moment he went into the room, he frowned because of the smell that was all around the room. Holmes said “What brings you here?” not even looking at Watson. Watson sat down on the sofa and said “Mrs. Hudson called me.” Holmes silently passed a letter that was in his hand with the newspaper. “Jammy Estiorra? Who is this?” Watson read out the strange name on the letter and looked at Holmes. Holmes finally stood up from the sofa and picked up his violin. “Professor James Moriarty.” Holmes replied while holding the violin. Watson couldn’t understand what Holmes was saying but he just started to read the letter.

-Dear. Sherlock Holmes

It’s been a while since we met. I guess you’re missing me as well.

I prepared a present for you. I have raised him since he was 10 years old.

He has grown beautifully and strong. I wasn’t expecting him to do this well.

Will you be able to stop him?

He listens to me. He will never disobey me.

Holmes, two filthy prostitutes are going to be found soon.

He won’t stop, and prostitutes will be found dead until they all disappear.

There is nothing you can do, Holmes.

I’ll tell you one thing. His name is Jack the Ripper.

Let’s see what you can do, Holmes.

Watson looked at Holmes after reading the letter. He looked shocked because of the name that was mentioned in the letter. Then he carefully watched the name again. ‘Jammy Estiorra’ was just a mixture of ‘James Moriarty’. Holmes placed the violin where it was before. “Seems like you’ve notice. Yes, the letter is from Professor James Moriarty. That name is just a silly joke. It’s time for us to leave. We should head to the ‘White Chapel’.”

By the time the letter that Professor Moriarty sent, was arrived to Holmes, another letter was arrived at the London press. The letter started with ‘Dear. Boss’. He indicated his hatred towards the prostitutes and confidently said that polices will never be able to arrest him. He predicted the murder that is going to happen and at the last, he named himself as ‘Jack the Ripper’.

Swanson inspector was still wandering around the scene of incident. He couldn’t stop thinking that the culprit might be belonging to the upper class. The two bodies that were found were dissected as if it was used in the dissection class. They weren’t able to find any clue about the culprit. All they found out was that the two victims were both prostitutes. There was another person who was wandering around the scene. It was Holmes. After listening to Swanson inspector about all the personal information of the two victims, Holmes sat down on the ground and didn’t move. Watson sat down beside Holmes. Holmes was staring at the scene. A few minutes later, he suddenly stood up. Watson was trying to follow him, but Holmes stopped him. “Stay here, and see if anyone is coming close to the scene. I won’t be long.” Holmes whispered to Watson and walked away. Watson sighed and stared at the scene just like Holmes.

Prosecutors were all around the White Chapel. They waited all night but Jack the Ripper didn’t show up. Early morning, they all pulled out and returned. Expecting that Jack the Ripper showing up the next day. However, few hours later, bodies were found at White Chapel. Swanson inspector ran into the scene of incident. He could see that it was done by Jack the Ripper as the bodies were dissected.

Holmes was shocked. He stayed near brothels all night but he didn’t see anyone suspicious person. He crushed the letter that he received from Professor Moriarty. Holmes was blaming himself. He couldn’t stop the murder. Holmes unfolded the map he had. All of the prostitutes were working at the different brothel. Holmes frowned and stared at the map. Then Holmes suddenly realized something. He held a pen and started drawing lines on the map. All four of them had to pass the same street to go to the brothel.

Another letter was sent to the London press. That letter was immediately impounded by the prosecution. This also was from Jack the Ripper. The letter started with “none of you were able to stop me.” He blamed the prosecutors for not being able to arrest him. He also mentioned that his murder is yet incomplete which means he will still continue the murder. The case was driving Swanson inspector crazy. He yelled at the prosecutors to protect White Chapel.

Three days have been passed since the letter arrived. It was 5:40am. Mary Jane Kelly was on her way to return home. She was exhausted and sleepy. She had to walk faster and faster to go home and get some sleep. Someone suddenly grabbed her arm. She stared at him exasperatedly. He said, “It’s been a while, Jane. Long time no see.” Mary carefully looked at the man’s face. Then all of a sudden, her face was full of fright.

Holmes rushed into every alley in White Chapel. Then he suddenly stopped. He could smell blood. He slowly walked and then turned to his left. The scene was horrifying. The body wasn’t dissected. She was cruelly slashed to death. Jack the Ripper was still there. Holmes pulled out a pistol. “Guess I was too late.” Holmes said. Jack the Ripper looked back at him. “I didn’t expect you would find me. Guess you are more intelligent than I thought.” Jack the Ripper placed a piece of paper near the body so the prosecutors will be able to find it. Holmes looked down the body. “I didn’t expect that you could murder the one you loved.” Jack the Ripper grinned and walked away from the body. “Professor James Moriarty.” Jack the Ripper walked towards Holmes, taking off his gloves. “You shouldn’t be calling that name. How did you find out that I was Jack the Ripper?” He was still grinning as if nothing happened. “The four victims were camouflages for this murder. You’re target was Mary Jane Kelly from the first place.” They could hear sirens. Moriarty slowly walked pass Holmes. “That’s right. But there is nothing you can do, Holmes. There is no evidence.” Moriarty slowly pointed at the piece of paper he dropped. “Let’s see if you can make that as evidence.” Moriarty slowly drifted away from the scene of murder. Holmes picked up the piece of paper and read what was written. “The jewels are the man that will not be blamed for nothing.”

He placed the piece of paper back to where it was. Then he left the alley.

Jack the Ripper’s murder was stopped from then. There were lots of rumors but there was no truth. People assumed Jack the Ripper has died. May be that is true. Jack the Ripper has died. But Professor James Moriarty was still alive. Holmes threw the newspaper in the rubbish bin. Watson can see that Holmes was depressed. “I couldn’t stop it.” Holmes sat down on the sofa. “May be. But the murder has stopped now. You have saved the sixth victim.” Holmes looked at Watson. “I wasn’t able to arrest him.” Watson couldn’t say anything. All of a sudden, there was a knock on the door. It was a client. It was a young lady. Holmes was listening to her. Watson could see he is not depressed anymore. As Holmes received another request, he tried to forget everything about Jack the Ripper. Promising with himself to arrest Professor Moriarty one day.